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Monday, 7 September 2015

Float

                                                            

                                            Calm  waters
                                   river boats floating  listlessly
                                           boatman idle.

                                                          

                                       Dark clouds float
                                 like  monkey horse or a fairy
                                        children thrilled.

Written for Haiku Horixons prompt 80 'Float'
http://myblog-verses.blogspot.com/2015/05/74.html.. click here






                                                           
                                                     

18 comments:

  1. I especially love the images in your "dark clouds float" haiku.This "child" is still thrilled by such things. ;-)

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  2. Nicely done!! the first one I saw on the lake last week:) and I just love your second haiku...just stunning!

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  3. as lovely as always ma'am :-)
    Cheers, Archana - http://drishti.co/2015/09/07/fly-right/

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  4. Lovely pair of haiku. Not sure which one is my favorite. Both are marvelous! ♥

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  5. lovely ... and like to watch those clouds floating with the children! Bastet

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  6. I woukd love to disturb the boatman and ask them to ferry me across.

    Children love the sight of clouds as they change tjeir shape.

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/float.html?m=1

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  7. I woukd love to disturb the boatman and ask them to ferry me across.

    Children love the sight of clouds as they change tjeir shape.

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/float.html?m=1

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  8. I woukd love to disturb the boatman and ask them to ferry me across.

    Children love the sight of clouds as they change tjeir shape.

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/float.html?m=1

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  9. I woukd love to disturb the boatman and ask them to ferry me across.

    Children love the sight of clouds as they change tjeir shape.

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/float.html?m=1

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