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Monday 20 October 2014

Release....Haiku

                                                               

                                                                      Suffering from pain
                                                               God gave him heavenly space
                                                                       release from life.


                                                                       School bell rings
                                                                children  jostle to run out,
                                                                      released from  jail?.



                                                                     No release for her
                                                               dire  unpardonable  offence,
                                                                      none  pitied her.



Written for Haiku Horizons  prompt #  week 35 'Release'.



















8 comments:

  1. Loved your depiction of release in different forms. Well written

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  2. All good but favoured the last one. What did she do? Write bad poetry? (giggles!)

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    1. Thank you Rallentanda. She refused to write poetry.

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  3. I used to think that school was jail. ;-) I enjoyed all your Haikus but the first especially touched me this morning. I have a relative who's bravely fighting a losing battle against cancer.

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    1. Thank you tdanceoflife. Sad to know about your relative. May God bless him/her.

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  4. loved the second one! In India, the schooling sucks and it seems like a jail indeed :)

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