northern lights

northern lights

Saturday, 4 July 2015


              Note  This is a very interesting form of Haiku, known as Tanka.   The first three lines are written Chiyo-Ni. The last lines are written by me    complimenting   Chiyo-Ni's three lines.                                        

                                                             morning glory!
                                                              the well bucket-entangled,
                                                              I ask for water

                                                             © Chiyo-Ni

                                                               Dry  throat
                                                               water  no less than henna.

Written Carpe Diem,s Ten Renga Challenge # 92 Chiyo.Ni Morning Glory

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